OK i hopped you like my totally hard work and please comment,literary please comment because i have beryl ency comments on my blogs bye.
Thursday, 28 May 2020
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Hey all how you doing today i am going to talk to you about my writing, don't get imitated by the title i just wrote that so you would read this. OK so i had to read/watch a video called la Luna,totally not boring. and the video was broken into 9 chunks,i think. And i had to write 1 chunk. here is a screen shot of my totally Hard work.
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good blog maybe work on your punctuation. But it was very informing good job
ReplyDeletethanks for the good comment
ReplyDeleteHi Dejon,You have a very good blog there! Maybe work a bit more on your capital letters. But other than that, very good post!
ReplyDeleteHello Dejon.
ReplyDeleteCool story,I liked the part when you said "as if they were five year olds fighting over how to wear a hat"
Next time when your going to put a comma down then you should press space after your put it down and continue typing. Because a lot of your spelling has comma then no space.
Hayun